tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post3281861155314805716..comments2024-03-19T16:33:37.836+05:30Comments on Once upon a page...: Usha ki AahatRitesh Agarwalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-17677904953349453302013-07-12T01:23:18.289+05:302013-07-12T01:23:18.289+05:30Wow...some great words there...arey, i was a good ...Wow...some great words there...arey, i was a good student in hindi during my high school days...this poem is a leftover...a sort of a revisit to good, old times :PRitesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-15681997314607048842013-07-11T23:03:29.732+05:302013-07-11T23:03:29.732+05:30so u grew up 3 years back ? and you have just refi...so u grew up 3 years back ? and you have just refined .. every moment ! Good !! Past is to cherish .. future is to dream .. and present is to what you love .. and do it the best, I say - thats MySay ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-41585548473219854952013-07-08T00:44:04.798+05:302013-07-08T00:44:04.798+05:30hehe ^_^hehe ^_^Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-78787740903883365112013-07-07T19:58:56.522+05:302013-07-07T19:58:56.522+05:30That was a cute poem, d poetry wali genre me :DThat was a cute poem, d poetry wali genre me :DM'Bai Madrasihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13892481269775523000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-52006678773746237552013-07-07T00:31:57.821+05:302013-07-07T00:31:57.821+05:30bilkul....ab boards ki taiyyari karo harsha ^_^bilkul....ab boards ki taiyyari karo harsha ^_^Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-57577220195605887572013-07-07T00:31:04.977+05:302013-07-07T00:31:04.977+05:30haha.....ya it should be samapt :)haha.....ya it should be samapt :)Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-68142439690338024492013-07-06T21:45:55.454+05:302013-07-06T21:45:55.454+05:30Arre wah yaar... sahi hai.. waise one thing I woul...Arre wah yaar... sahi hai.. waise one thing I would like to say... "khatam" is not shudh hindi like the other words .. so woh mujhe thoda khatka. Otherwise.. very creative. Heard "Nishakaal" after a long time. <br /><br />*claps*Namrotahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08570259961933592273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-78879225724026536142013-07-06T21:03:54.237+05:302013-07-06T21:03:54.237+05:30This one is really nice..Lag ta hai class 10 ki ya...This one is really nice..Lag ta hai class 10 ki yadein taaza ho gaye..:-)Harsha Bhuyanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13968901328027313955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-85872652258481973982013-07-03T19:02:18.130+05:302013-07-03T19:02:18.130+05:30thanks rachna....i will figure out a way to write ...thanks rachna....i will figure out a way to write in hindi next time...promise Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-39406255381661069562013-07-03T12:10:47.270+05:302013-07-03T12:10:47.270+05:30It's lovely and yes do type in Hindi. There is...It's lovely and yes do type in Hindi. There is transliteration available on blogger.Rachnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02275266551382931603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-62920030159937466572013-07-03T01:02:03.953+05:302013-07-03T01:02:03.953+05:30Okay saru....i didnt know how to type in hindi na ...Okay saru....i didnt know how to type in hindi na Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-37649078072924066222013-07-03T01:01:01.779+05:302013-07-03T01:01:01.779+05:30:p:pRitesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-16565366985284091742013-07-02T22:12:51.412+05:302013-07-02T22:12:51.412+05:30Actually it is a fun read. Please type in hindi ne...Actually it is a fun read. Please type in hindi next time.Saru Singhalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12860642404643756746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-26960121542288062482013-07-02T00:44:41.262+05:302013-07-02T00:44:41.262+05:30ati sundar :Dati sundar :DSridevi Nayak Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10919048003828160918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-79276536724416729982013-07-02T00:07:13.046+05:302013-07-02T00:07:13.046+05:30thanks megha :)thanks megha :)Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-7257778784599404542013-07-02T00:06:37.461+05:302013-07-02T00:06:37.461+05:30Haan par mujhe nahi pata ki hindi mein hum kaise l...Haan par mujhe nahi pata ki hindi mein hum kaise likhen Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-20893797216165308672013-07-02T00:03:20.760+05:302013-07-02T00:03:20.760+05:30Wow u have written it beautifully :)Wow u have written it beautifully :)Megha Sarafhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07662436474024905514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-82169349148736674212013-07-02T00:01:59.212+05:302013-07-02T00:01:59.212+05:30:P :):P :)Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-15758509606409298542013-07-01T23:46:55.587+05:302013-07-01T23:46:55.587+05:30सुन्दर रचना ... शब्दों का सरलता से किया गया प्रयोग...सुन्दर रचना ... शब्दों का सरलता से किया गया प्रयोग इसे प्रभावी बना रहा है !!<br />एक सलाह है आपके लिए... यदि आप इस कविता या आपकी कोई भी हिंदी की रचना को हिंदी लिपि (देवनागरी ) में लिखेंगे तो इसकी सुन्दरता बढ़ जाएगी और पाठको के लिए पढना भी सरल होगा !!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-33148038473223641382013-07-01T22:45:39.912+05:302013-07-01T22:45:39.912+05:30Kal Kal karte neer ki bhanti ye kavya rachna shabd...Kal Kal karte neer ki bhanti ye kavya rachna shabdo ki jhilmil me timtima rahi hai. :P :P :PSurbhi Bafnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15730739059204687657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-35957440377209967722013-07-01T19:27:15.906+05:302013-07-01T19:27:15.906+05:30haha....fab?? ye kitna mediocre poem hai... :P
Ya...haha....fab?? ye kitna mediocre poem hai... :P <br />Ya, thoda un text books ki tarah ho gaya :PRitesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-23003720375722878112013-07-01T19:17:20.582+05:302013-07-01T19:17:20.582+05:30Wow! Kya yaar! Chupa rustum again! This is one fab...Wow! Kya yaar! Chupa rustum again! This is one fab one, reminded me of the ones i have read in text books :)Bushrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16167160087114353868noreply@blogger.com