tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post51921234198967012..comments2024-03-19T16:33:37.836+05:30Comments on Once upon a page...: 55 word story: The white pearlRitesh Agarwalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-2371856074660418972013-01-24T00:10:14.767+05:302013-01-24T00:10:14.767+05:30hi Kappu....thanks much :)hi Kappu....thanks much :)Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-26972556752104004422013-01-23T11:31:29.601+05:302013-01-23T11:31:29.601+05:30That was a good one...
Do visit my blog! Would lo...That was a good one...<br /><br /><a href="http://grafitti-on-my-wall.blogspot.in/2013/01/short-fiction-deafening-silence.html" rel="nofollow">Do visit my blog! Would love to see you by! *cheers* </a> Kappuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10030279740286774339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-25734516824676550162013-01-17T19:50:07.392+05:302013-01-17T19:50:07.392+05:30Thanks Es Chris. :)Thanks Es Chris. :)Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-36473953544414802642013-01-17T16:46:57.273+05:302013-01-17T16:46:57.273+05:30You can do much better. First time hopping here, l...You can do much better. First time hopping here, looking forward to read some of your other posts. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12015608113087296300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-56549714451683943452013-01-16T13:01:12.659+05:302013-01-16T13:01:12.659+05:30Hehe, I am your fan too for the effortless humor &...Hehe, I am your fan too for the effortless humor & realism u put into your stories. :))Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-2493815048811363012013-01-16T08:50:51.703+05:302013-01-16T08:50:51.703+05:30Your innate ability to write short stories make yo...Your innate ability to write short stories make your work highly intriguing. I'm your fan sir! Superb..Prasoon Kharehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12407458380840589755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-87453730315640649272013-01-16T00:07:30.523+05:302013-01-16T00:07:30.523+05:30Hi. I had that option. That she would wake up and ...Hi. I had that option. That she would wake up and find a pearl in her palm. But i wanted it to be a tad subtle. I prefer to keep my endings open to multiple interpretations. <br />Anyway, thanks for your good suggestion. :)Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-48277151348385842212013-01-16T00:04:34.420+05:302013-01-16T00:04:34.420+05:30hi vinay..thanks much :)hi vinay..thanks much :)Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-15469130218701847022013-01-15T20:31:24.769+05:302013-01-15T20:31:24.769+05:30Good attempt. Make it tighter. //If the pearl was ...Good attempt. Make it tighter. //If the pearl was in her palm, why does it fall off when she throws away the blanket? The story doesn't ask a reader to make a jump in imagination.//<br /><br />But I'll admit, you are good at shorty stuff.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-46467359149556660542013-01-15T09:32:44.417+05:302013-01-15T09:32:44.417+05:30That was a good one. :)That was a good one. :)vinayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02483120636245740181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-15381202809002891792013-01-13T23:21:35.037+05:302013-01-13T23:21:35.037+05:30Shukriya Neha ji :PShukriya Neha ji :PRitesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-54256691820458752092013-01-13T23:21:01.557+05:302013-01-13T23:21:01.557+05:30This Saru is the most encouraging comment I have e...This Saru is the most encouraging comment I have ever received...and coming from you,it's a big thing. Thanks much. I promise i won't let you down in the future :)Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-62160677783580720012013-01-13T23:19:16.975+05:302013-01-13T23:19:16.975+05:30Hey Crystal, who knows your mom may outlive you. P...Hey Crystal, who knows your mom may outlive you. Prayers for her long health. And, of course, those who die can come back to us :)Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-6318548845337421722013-01-13T23:04:40.283+05:302013-01-13T23:04:40.283+05:30wonderful....wonderful....Neha Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12707560695941297699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-81251868388112325752013-01-13T08:16:30.356+05:302013-01-13T08:16:30.356+05:30You know you rock at this genre of writing. I have...You know you rock at this genre of writing. I haven't read anyone as good as you. Saru Singhalhttp://sarusinghal.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-30834831990887037482013-01-13T04:40:49.204+05:302013-01-13T04:40:49.204+05:30very sad.. and haunting little tail Ritesh.. Maybe...very sad.. and haunting little tail Ritesh.. Maybe my mom will come back to visit me when it's her time to leave this world.. C.S.Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06931727241982253089noreply@blogger.com