tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post5592245292587956056..comments2024-03-19T16:33:37.836+05:30Comments on Once upon a page...: The RevengeRitesh Agarwalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-75836664312310319822012-07-05T18:16:49.598+05:302012-07-05T18:16:49.598+05:30thanks :)thanks :)Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-28226882360333440162012-07-05T17:39:45.997+05:302012-07-05T17:39:45.997+05:30It was a nice story.
And Crystal: Thanks for tho...It was a nice story. <br /><br />And Crystal: Thanks for those tips. I would keep those pointers in mind before I attempt my next story.ಅಶ್ವಿನಿ/ Ashwinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01429274307224478792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-7974201809299539942012-07-05T15:48:46.511+05:302012-07-05T15:48:46.511+05:30thanks sneha :)thanks sneha :)Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-21845686099150167592012-07-05T15:48:24.420+05:302012-07-05T15:48:24.420+05:30:):)Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-63477766363062021962012-07-05T09:08:28.833+05:302012-07-05T09:08:28.833+05:30nice story!nice story!Sneha Rahul Choudharyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17588183386509131215noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-71847078050905058202012-07-04T23:58:56.186+05:302012-07-04T23:58:56.186+05:30You are great too Ritesh!!! AND I BELIEVE IN YOU!!...You are great too Ritesh!!! AND I BELIEVE IN YOU!!! I love your stories!!C.S.Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06931727241982253089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-27084284948713044482012-07-04T22:46:00.657+05:302012-07-04T22:46:00.657+05:30thanks crystal....u r greatthanks crystal....u r greatRitesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-30880253485225428832012-07-04T21:48:26.245+05:302012-07-04T21:48:26.245+05:30Oh wow... this was an amazing post but there's...Oh wow... this was an amazing post but there's a small but.. I think you should study dialogue.. it would help out with your writing and your short stories, the way it sounds now, you have a pretty good screen play. <br /><br />Screen plays don't often have dialogue quotation marks. It states the speaker's name and then it shows the person's lines (what they're supposed to say) <br /><br />In fiction and short stories, you have to learn how to use the dialogue quotations. It makes the flow of your writing sound better and it makes it move more smoothly.. <br /><br />For example, <br /><br /> "I had one before I died," said the stranger on the other end. <br /> "You have a great sense of humor." I laughed. <br /><br /><br />Typical screen plays do this,<br /><br />Me- Do you have a boyfriend?<br />Stranger- I had one before I died.<br />Me- You have a great sense of humor.<br /><br />and also at some point after the person's lines, it usually narrates what the person is doing, for instance go to google and look up shakespears screen plays or any kind of screen play and you'll see how they write the screen play and how they narrate what the speaker or other guests are doing while they're reciting their lines. It's really neat. <br /><br />So, lovely post, the story line is awesome and the plot is really great but I think you need to decide what you want this piece to be.. either a screen play or a short story.. I could see it being slightly confusing to other readers..C.S.Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06931727241982253089noreply@blogger.com