tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post682369715300841102..comments2024-03-19T16:33:37.836+05:30Comments on Once upon a page...: An unusual night Ritesh Agarwalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-39694966041993169592013-08-06T10:57:33.844+05:302013-08-06T10:57:33.844+05:30hi nabeela....thank you dear :))hi nabeela....thank you dear :))Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-66731653111738047822013-08-06T10:55:25.013+05:302013-08-06T10:55:25.013+05:30hi swati...thanks dear :)hi swati...thanks dear :)Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-64285924884020674222013-08-04T23:38:43.574+05:302013-08-04T23:38:43.574+05:30Super read!! Creepy and scary.. loved the climax!!...Super read!! Creepy and scary.. loved the climax!!:-)<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05301573459752083059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-68653451988773968372013-06-29T23:05:26.954+05:302013-06-29T23:05:26.954+05:30Wow... its was really an awesome read..!!
Differen...Wow... its was really an awesome read..!!<br />Different and passionate story... tricky end.. I must u r really gud at "twist at the end"...!! Well done <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-89067995457271533252013-05-28T21:26:12.467+05:302013-05-28T21:26:12.467+05:30Thanks....would try to get better ....keep reading...Thanks....would try to get better ....keep reading Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-32741370591207119752013-05-28T12:35:41.658+05:302013-05-28T12:35:41.658+05:30Got here through IndiBlogger...
I liked this shor...Got here through IndiBlogger...<br /><br />I liked this short fiction for its first two or three paragraphs. But it would have a greater impact if you followed up the erotica passages with a final line that revealed she is a ghost, instead of stating it way ahead in the narration...<br /><br />Hope to read more of your work...Mohammed Musthafahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10211307048155699461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-21479728545396961622013-05-13T19:04:31.273+05:302013-05-13T19:04:31.273+05:30thanks anupam :)thanks anupam :)Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-37976121449777675172013-05-13T16:57:05.925+05:302013-05-13T16:57:05.925+05:30Interesting Read :DInteresting Read :DAnupam Karnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13180006039022421006noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-23049277175884233482013-05-13T14:18:27.023+05:302013-05-13T14:18:27.023+05:30hello isha....thanks for reading and appreciating ...hello isha....thanks for reading and appreciating ^_^Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-50397572700167298022013-05-13T13:46:06.827+05:302013-05-13T13:46:06.827+05:30I really liked it, specially the end. The last two...I really liked it, specially the end. The last two lines did the trick for the story! Ishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13989501262471812042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-29350639627199189622013-05-12T18:46:43.872+05:302013-05-12T18:46:43.872+05:30Hehe, i am not much familiar with the technical di...Hehe, i am not much familiar with the technical differences between a vampire and ghost :P <br /><br />I have also written short stories about vampires...you may check them out some day :)Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-30004609694153396202013-05-12T18:45:31.140+05:302013-05-12T18:45:31.140+05:30thanks jasmeet thanks jasmeet Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-37269994303342311112013-05-12T18:40:32.450+05:302013-05-12T18:40:32.450+05:30Thank you Kislaya. :))Thank you Kislaya. :))Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-10284065531895209342013-05-12T18:39:59.392+05:302013-05-12T18:39:59.392+05:30yes, to depart is to leave behind a trail of pain ...yes, to depart is to leave behind a trail of pain Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-62879831720502960562013-05-12T10:27:19.950+05:302013-05-12T10:27:19.950+05:30I liked the narration... very well done. The twist...I liked the narration... very well done. The twist the last two lines give the story is the hero here.<br />It was twilight-ish.<br />However, I feel, it should be a vampire and not a ghost.. as ghosts aren't known to sleep in coffins... but the bloodsucker undeads are. What say?<br />Namrotahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08570259961933592273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-57711505307581888422013-05-11T21:22:49.899+05:302013-05-11T21:22:49.899+05:30nice read :P nice read :P Jasmeethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05372066813045083252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-78956735472522694732013-05-11T19:40:26.278+05:302013-05-11T19:40:26.278+05:30That was very unique! And the narration is just aw...That was very unique! And the narration is just awesome and racy..<br />quite adventourous though!KISLAYA GOPALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647106515193706602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-44866884144121807982013-05-11T19:06:35.882+05:302013-05-11T19:06:35.882+05:30love needs no mass .. does it ? I loved every bit ...love needs no mass .. does it ? I loved every bit of the story ! Pain is to depart .. real pain when you know there may not be any other day similar to the spent <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-37451122964059015402013-05-10T11:48:49.355+05:302013-05-10T11:48:49.355+05:30k :)k :)Bushrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16167160087114353868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-56984739319208663362013-05-10T00:14:34.787+05:302013-05-10T00:14:34.787+05:30Ummm.....any genre...it's up to you....u decid...Ummm.....any genre...it's up to you....u decide and tell meRitesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-66042492410978474282013-05-09T22:10:27.537+05:302013-05-09T22:10:27.537+05:30Ha ha :)
................talking about the author...Ha ha :) <br />................talking about the author, i would love to write something for ur blog! :) Reading your comment, i was all excited!.......just tell me what genre, and i'll try my best :)Bushrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16167160087114353868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-53518202882860304002013-05-09T00:33:09.476+05:302013-05-09T00:33:09.476+05:30this was, i personally feel, not a top-class liter...this was, i personally feel, not a top-class literary piece....i hope u liked it though Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-44920275949383789672013-05-09T00:22:35.507+05:302013-05-09T00:22:35.507+05:30I meant "strange n unusual" :D
it was wa...I meant "strange n unusual" :D<br />it was way too romantic to be scary :PJyoti Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01794675170127168298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-10769913827156528872013-05-09T00:20:19.476+05:302013-05-09T00:20:19.476+05:30It's a tad bizarre i reckon....not quite spook...It's a tad bizarre i reckon....not quite spooky or scary.....but if u can get some goosebumps, then i wil sleep a satisfied man ^_^Ritesh Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10719270476812591328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1527438694728271680.post-29211957674428032822013-05-09T00:14:36.011+05:302013-05-09T00:14:36.011+05:30one eery bed time story Ritesh :P
one eery bed time story Ritesh :P <br />Jyoti Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01794675170127168298noreply@blogger.com