Thursday, August 29, 2013

A very short story: In search of true love





By the time I reached, Babloo had already cut the cake. I had deliberately reached late, arriving at the opportune moment when dinner was being served. 

I recognised a few faces, most were Babloo's school friends.

I avoided their gaze. 

They treated me as an outcast, often hurling snide remarks and scornful looks at my fragile and unpleasant build.

I sneaked into a corner, disappointed at the menu. I do have a sweet tooth but I dislike chocolate pastries.

A shriek exploded near my ears. Namrota had spotted me. 

I panicked, frisked into a drain pipe and landed headfirst over something soft. 

My whiskers stood up in glee. 

I had found my cheese. Yay





[This post is a part of the game ‘NibblePromptly’ in the birthday party at A Rat’s Nibble.]

44 comments:

  1. Eeeeee mousyyyyy :o :( :P

    I loved it :D

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  2. haha thats a cute story but rats, you haven't nibbled your cheese yet to land elsewhere?? :(

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    1. hey rat, I wasn't aware if that was mandatory....now i have prepared this story only for you and after much thought...please accept it na

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    2. ya sure its already in.. and i absolutely loved this story, rats. after all its all about us ;) but the judge's decision and the readers' choice are final :)

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  3. Haha! Ab har jagah Namrota Namrota.... :D Pure Laila Majnu! :) Sweet short story :)

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  4. Hahaha...good one!!
    Guess you found your cheese..in real life too ;) Congratulations! :)

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  5. ohhh...how disappointing but cute too :P i know thats a weird combination but nvm!

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  6. Lovely, a rat who hates chocolate pastries. :)

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    1. hehe...ya, we have such rats in our family :P

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  7. Ha ha, the rat is lucky enough to choose his pastries. Very nice :-)

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  9. This was a surprise .. you ideally are a thriller man :) But worth all love ..
    Sorry for not being around .. peeping into the work of master of 55 .. I have been forced to join a job by my selfish stomach .. and the boss reminds me .. a penny is earned hard .. always .. :)
    Roti ne blogging bhula de mere bhai :)

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    1. you are always a bit too generous to me....ya i can see that u have kinda disappeared from blogging :(

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