By the time I reached, Babloo had already
cut the cake. I had deliberately reached late, arriving at the opportune moment
when dinner was being served.
I recognised a few faces, most were Babloo's school friends.
I recognised a few faces, most were Babloo's school friends.
I avoided their gaze.
They treated me as an outcast, often hurling snide remarks and scornful looks at my fragile and unpleasant build.
They treated me as an outcast, often hurling snide remarks and scornful looks at my fragile and unpleasant build.
I sneaked into a corner, disappointed at
the menu. I do have a sweet tooth but I dislike chocolate pastries.
A shriek exploded near my ears. Namrota had
spotted me.
I panicked, frisked into a drain pipe and landed headfirst over something soft.
My whiskers stood up in glee.
I had found my cheese. Yay
I panicked, frisked into a drain pipe and landed headfirst over something soft.
My whiskers stood up in glee.
I had found my cheese. Yay
Eeeeee mousyyyyy :o :( :P
ReplyDeleteI loved it :D
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Deletehaha thats a cute story but rats, you haven't nibbled your cheese yet to land elsewhere?? :(
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Deleteya sure its already in.. and i absolutely loved this story, rats. after all its all about us ;) but the judge's decision and the readers' choice are final :)
Deleteyup no probs...thanks
DeleteHaha! Ab har jagah Namrota Namrota.... :D Pure Laila Majnu! :) Sweet short story :)
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Delete:/? Kyun sad? Be happy yaar :D
DeleteHappy hi hoon :P
DeleteHahaha...good one!!
ReplyDeleteGuess you found your cheese..in real life too ;) Congratulations! :)
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Deleteohhh...how disappointing but cute too :P i know thats a weird combination but nvm!
ReplyDeletehehe okay, no prob :P
DeleteLovely, a rat who hates chocolate pastries. :)
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DeleteGood twist in the tale!
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