Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Pathos of the 'someone'

Deep, dense, dark clouds hover above...
As the oceans weep beneath
Awaiting the sun to show up
And a ray of hope to peep....
A Tempest is brewing in the heart of the sea
A Whirlpool of gloom whirling and swirling....
The wave is looking up
Hoping and pleading
Praying amidst all desolation
Amidst solitude and hopelessness
For one....only one...just one
Elusive sliver of  ray
To show before the end of the Day...


6 comments:

  1. ritesh this one did take my breathe away...I did read it before...but somehow couldn't comment...you are just doing fine....!

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  2. Thanks Wanderer. I read your comment today after more than a year.

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  3. so intense..

    Glad to have found you via indiblogger. your newest follower and aregular visitor now.
    cheers
    Kajal

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    1. I really appreciate that you take the pains of visiting every post of my blog. Thanks Kajal :)

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  4. Look at your selection of words...
    completely amazing.
    Rock on..

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    1. Thanks....please revisit, recomment and, simply, rock on :)

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