Sunday, February 24, 2013

55 word story: My 7th victim




I stabbed my father last week. He was getting on my nerves. I’ll miss him. Next day, my nagging wife was laid to rest. I hated my cat’s stare. She went next. My boss and neighbour followed suit. Yesterday, I slew the author. Tonight, I’ll commit one final murder. And my 7th victim is YOU.   




10 comments:

  1. Haha :D
    So, what the reader should think after reading this, I'm going to be a ghost. :P
    You script some horror play and that will hit the stores :D

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    1. SURBHI, YOU ARE NEXT! BEWARE THE IDES OF MARCH

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  2. I am afraid...do you know my address?

    jokes apart...this one is splendidly structured and ended with a mystery...but one thing that is amusing me...why a cat in betwee other cold blooded murders?

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    1. The cat is significant to the story....it signifies the person's state of psychology...he murders just for the pleasure of it and just to vent some kind of personal frustration.

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    1. Hi Asteria...good to see u here again. And ya, I suffer from a bit of hitchcock syndrome in the sense that i like thrillers, brutal murders and psychos running loose :) :/

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  4. Mummy! You scared me! That picture is so horrible_creepy *bhago from your blog*:)

    Nice, threatening post:)

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  5. It took me around 30 minutes to decide the pic. Credit to Google Images! Glad that you got scared up. It makes my day :))

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  6. Hi Rat. Ya, would be checking out soon

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