Her rosy cheeks and straw-colored hairs were
precisely as I had visualized them, yet I was appalled at the similarity.
“Who are you,” I spoke in a shaky voice. Her
eyes were no longer the vulnerable pair of black balls I had envisaged earlier.
They appeared demoniac and held me in a gaze so venomous that I shuddered.
She burst into a gurgle of devilish laughter. “You
weren’t expecting me, were you? But I have come back from the dead.”
I was half-conscious of the fact that it was
just a dream, but before I could recollect my thoughts, the knife was through
my heart.
Her vengeance complete, she dissipated into the
thin air.
I paid the price for having killed Samaira in my
bestseller.
-Ritesh
Twitter: RitzyChoclate
[This story has been written for Write Tribe’s ‘100words on Saturday’]
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