In those seven seconds of fall, he sees himself
being cradled, mom bandaging his wound, dad pushing the bicycle, Maths tutor
slapping him, peeping into Mrs Sen’s bathroom, sleeping with Sunaina, graduating,
parents finding a girl, first night, he slapping her coz she is not a virgin,
on honeymoon she pushing him off the cliff………..
[This post is written for IndiSpire as a part of
ongoing theme ‘Virginity should not be regarded as a girl’s character
certificate’]
~Ritesh
Agarwal
Email: ritzy182000@gmail.com
I have to say, Ritesh, this is an interesting way of putting your views into words. I am curious though, how long did it take you to write these 55 words? I am sure it's not an easy task.
ReplyDeleteCool hai!
ReplyDeletewonderfully written
ReplyDeletewow dude....talent...;-)
ReplyDeleteGood one :)
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Great write up, a good mashup..
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone
ReplyDeleteWhoaa!! Action packed seven seconds I must say.
ReplyDeleteHats off to the 55 words that encased them! :)