Thursday, December 20, 2012

Flash 55 fiction: Home Sweet Home


I pushed the rotten gate and entered the dilapidated mansion. It felt sweet to be back.


A crisp voice cut through the chilly air- “Better leave this place, son. It’s haunted.” The old man looked ill and pallid.

“But where would I go, Sir,” I said. “This is my home for the last 300 years.”



11 comments:

  1. Hi Ritesh,

    Hmm, interesting. I guess ghosts must be better off than humans, at least they don't commit crimes like the one in Delhi. Good F55 :)

    Regards

    Jay
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  2. Who knows what the ghosts really do? :)

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  3. WOW, that was a power packed 55. Awesome, you really have a knack for it.

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    1. Thank you Saru. These words coming from a popular blogger like you are really encouraging :)

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  4. wonderful.. Loved it!! I think it has all the ingredient of a 55 fiction.. Great!! :)

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    1. Hello Prasoon. Your words will prompt me to write more...I was having some doubts about this one, but now m more at ease. :)

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  5. Juz luv all ur Flash 55 Fictions....

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  6. Thanks Neha....this genre suits my style of writing to an extent :)

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