Saturday, May 18, 2013

Poem: The Gift of Life





In the autumn of my life....
You came like a spring....
Raining smiles at me
You made me croon and sing...

When love walked away
You stayed and held my arm....
When my soul was maimed, and heart felt stabbed
Your presence was constant, it smelt like a balm....

You are a sunshine, my rainbow, a ray
May your year be joyous, have a beautiful birthday :)





[This poem is my gift to a dear friend who recently celebrated her birthday]



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18 comments:

  1. Awww! Your friend's so lucky! Beautiful dedication Ritesh! Loved the first two lines to the core!

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    1. thanks bushra...My poetic skills are pretty limited....but i tried to write something emotive

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  3. This poetry is a nice tribute to friendship.

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  4. this is such a wonderful tribute ritesh :) loved it... especially the lines when love walked away.. beautiful!!

    Richa

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  5. Lucky girl .. who has friend who writes so nicely. Good to know your respect for friendship!! Very Nicely expressed !
    I had a friend too.. I doodled her face on her birthday .. its been 4 years she stopped talking to me :) .. I think coming birthday , i will ask you to write another fabulous poem and present her ... and bluff her that I have diverted my creativity to writing from doodling :)

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    1. hehe ya sure ...but your doodles are better

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  6. A beautiful poem and a wonderful gift. Each line speaks a lot. :) cheers to friendship.

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    1. hi kislaya....your name is so beautiful....and thank you

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