There was pin drop silence in the theatre. A
bed scene was on.
Ratul made the first move. His hand slid
over my arms and he directed his face towards mine. Our lips came closer. I
exhaled in anticipation.....
“Bad breath,” He grimaced, backing off.
Embarrassed, I wished I had opted for a
good mouthwash.
Moral of the Story- Not paying heed to your oral hygiene can cost you your first kiss.Why not run through Colgate's tips & tricks for prevention and cure of Halitosis (bad breath)? You can read them all here and finally fortify your chances of getting that perfect kiss.
[This post is a part of IndiBlogger's Contest in association with Colgate.]
unique piece of writing summarized in 55 kool :)
ReplyDeletegood luck
hello jasmeet....ty :)
ReplyDeleteWOW! I did expect something cool from you for this contest, but this cool-wow! Too good!
ReplyDeletehehe, this story was 'okay' type....not that much 'cool' or 'wow' kind. But thanks ^_^
ReplyDeleteseriously a smart take on the contest :) And why does your bio say "currently unmarried" is tried tested shaadi.com not working :D :D
ReplyDeleteRicha
Hello Richa. I see that this is your visit at my blog. Pretty soon you would know why no girl would have me :P
Deletei felt horrible reading this .. so take this is as a compliment yet again.. 55 words and I was still engrossed !!
ReplyDeleteBest of Luck for the Contest !
Ummm thanks....why exactly did u feel like that :/
DeleteOh that was somehow funny to me, good take on this, atb for contest :)
ReplyDeleteya sort of funny it was....thanks kislaya ^_^
Deletelol. certainly a good take on the prompt. all the best rats :)
ReplyDeletehello rat....thanks for nibbling in dear
DeleteIt's quite different - a blend of the contest and the 55 word story! All the best for the contest! :)
ReplyDeletethank you isha.... :)
DeleteHa ha...good one...even at such intimate situation you chose to be different...!!!
ReplyDelete:D
Deletethat's nice story
ReplyDeleteThnx sir
DeleteWonderful! You are really good at 55. All the very best Ritesh :)
ReplyDeletehello saru...thanks mam
Deletesee see how much I like ur 55ers you got an award from me!! Congratulations you won a leibster award :)
ReplyDeleteYou can pick it up here:
http://subzeroricha.blogspot.in/2013/05/my-first-leibster-award-d-d.html
Happy blogging :)
Richa
Thank you richa ^_^
DeleteRitesh - You are too good at writing stories with limited words. Too good bro
ReplyDeleteTSw
Hi Ste. Thanks bro...
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