I tugged at the wardrobe and stepped back
in anticipation. 15 long years had expired since I last opened that wardrobe.
As it slowly screeched open, I expected a
whiff of stench, for it was here that I had dumped her body after driving the
knife through.
Darkness blinded my eyes and something
familiar leapt at me.
I uttered a horrified cry as the skeletal
cat dug at my chest, took a flight and disappeared out of the window.
She was alive, after all. Or was she not?
Curosity killed the cat perhaps! Nice work.
ReplyDeleteSpooky, very well written.
ReplyDeletewell, it's not as good as i wanted...but well thanks...i just 3-4 minutes to write it
DeleteWow! Engrossing! Eerie! Too good ji too good! :)
ReplyDeleteit was okay type....thanks anyways
Deleteooh creepy.. good one indeed.. :)
ReplyDeletethanks rats
Deletenice example for optical illusion
ReplyDeletehaha...i am no student of physics....it's just the Edgar Allan Poe effect ;)
ReplyDeleteLoved it..
ReplyDeletehorror, spooky drama :)
I always enjoy reading that !!
And I always enjoy writing that :)
DeleteAhh quite creepy! So whats the end she is alive after all?
ReplyDeleteRicha
It is a story with an open ending...i leave it to the reader...you make your interpretation
DeleteNice. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteTech
thanks arun :)
DeleteWhoa! nice one there..I loved it... I wanted to read more of it though... sadly it ended too soon for me.
ReplyDeleteThanks namrota...you are being kind there....
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