Saturday, March 10, 2012

55 word story: I Hate Teas and Coffees




Jovana sipped her coffee waiting for her unfaithful husband to pick up his poisoned tea. ‘You know dear, I have taken a strong dislike to teas and coffees since yesterday’s indigestion’- Peter reasoned pushing aside his cup....... And she slumped forward as Peter contentedly realised that the cyanide in her coffee had done the damage.


15 comments:

  1. Superb brother.. Loved the twist

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  2. Very nice...slightly wicked in a way but the makings of a great novel! I'd most definitely love to see more..;)

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    1. Thanks Crystal for going through each n every story of mine....U have definitely become my most favourite visitor :)

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  3. That was a nice... er... devilish twist to the story. Good one. !

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    1. Hee hee. Do remember this in future...The next time your husband prepares coffee for you... Just tell him, I hate teas & coffees :D

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  4. Man! that was some twist. loved it :)

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  5. Tit before Tat.. :O
    Read all of your 55 words.You seem an appreciable narrator. :)

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  6. Thank you surbhi for being so generous :)

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  7. Oh dangerous couple.. nice twist, Rats.

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