Wednesday, April 4, 2012

55 word story: The woman at the Café

She was sitting all alone at the opposite table. I looked at her and then all of a sudden, without a moment’s warning, I fell in love with her. Her eyes met my gaze….I smiled vaguely….She looked away. She paid her bill and walked out into the darkness. I went home with a heavy heart.


  1. Hmm....I probably wanted more words dude ! :)

    Keep Blogging!

  2. hehe...pity on you... :P
    sweetly written... :)

  3. hehehe, Ritesh why didn't you follow her... might be one more eye-contact and your incomplete story meets a colorful climax... by d way well written...

  4. @Revacios, the guy is just a figment of my imagination.
    @Nasir, it was a flash 55.
    @Cynosure: Dumbledore has said, "Don't pity the dead. Pity the living and especially those who live without love."
    @Mohit, this character is not me, though 'mere saath bhi aisa hota rehta hai'. :P


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