Thursday, July 4, 2013

शायरी : जी रहे थे हम




[I had written this silly shayari a few years back in my copy. Posting it here after Bushra's encouragement.]



तन्हाई  के  साये  में  जी  रहे  थे  हम
विरह  की  वेदना  में  सिसक  रहे  थे  हम….
कमबख्त   पलकों  ने  रोक  रखा  है  आंसुओ  को …….

उसे  ही  पी  पीकर  जी  रहे  थे  हम  





~रितेश अग्रवाल (रैटs)




23 comments:

  1. Waaaaaaah! Kya baat! Kya baat! Lovely shayari! Now it's in my favorites list.... :) Beautifully ended!

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  2. lovely!!
    you should write more often :)

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  3. U too are a superb shayar just like Bush :)

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  4. thanks megha....but i am not that good re. Bush is the queen in this genre ^_^

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  5. bhai sahab, chaa gaye aap...maana padega aapko

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  6. That's is a real touchy....Aur to hindi mein iska rang kuch jyada hi dekh raha hai...

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  7. arre beta bahut achhe! ab yeh batao likha kiske liye hai ? :D

    Richa

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    1. shukriya maa.....nai aise hi apne liya likha :/

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  8. OHHH WOWWW!!! Superb... bahut hi acche hai ...

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  9. Not at all silly!! Maybe you have outgrown the moment and not in gham any more :)

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  10. अतीत केअश्क़ को उकेर दिए बहुत खूब

    वो कंहे मैने उन्हें भुला रखा है
    अश्क़ बहते नहीं पलकों को सिला रखा है

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