Waaaaaaah! Kya baat! Kya baat! Lovely shayari! Now it's in my favorites list.... :) Beautifully ended!
not as good as you though :P
thanks Pink :)
lovely!!you should write more often :)
jee madam...koshish karunga :)
U too are a superb shayar just like Bush :)
thanks megha....but i am not that good re. Bush is the queen in this genre ^_^
bhai sahab, chaa gaye aap...maana padega aapko
That's is a real touchy....Aur to hindi mein iska rang kuch jyada hi dekh raha hai...
Thanks sir ^_^
arre beta bahut achhe! ab yeh batao likha kiske liye hai ? :D Richa
shukriya maa.....nai aise hi apne liya likha :/
OHHH WOWWW!!! Superb... bahut hi acche hai ...
Not at all silly!! Maybe you have outgrown the moment and not in gham any more :)
Haha....may be ;)
very nice Ritesh !!
अतीत केअश्क़ को उकेर दिए बहुत खूबवो कंहे मैने उन्हें भुला रखा हैअश्क़ बहते नहीं पलकों को सिला रखा है
Oh, now that you have taken the trouble to go through my post, feel free to pen a few words- review, criticism or the much-loved adulation!