[I had written this silly shayari a few years back in my copy. Posting it here after Bushra's encouragement.]
तन्हाई के साये
में जी रहे
थे हम
विरह की वेदना
में सिसक रहे
थे हम….
कमबख्त पलकों ने
रोक रखा है
आंसुओ को …….
उसे ही पी
पीकर जी रहे
थे हम
~रितेश अग्रवाल (रैटs)
Waaaaaaah! Kya baat! Kya baat! Lovely shayari! Now it's in my favorites list.... :) Beautifully ended!
ReplyDeletenot as good as you though :P
Deletenice yarr..!!
ReplyDeletethanks Pink :)
Deletelovely!!
ReplyDeleteyou should write more often :)
jee madam...koshish karunga :)
DeleteU too are a superb shayar just like Bush :)
ReplyDeletethanks megha....but i am not that good re. Bush is the queen in this genre ^_^
ReplyDeletebhai sahab, chaa gaye aap...maana padega aapko
ReplyDeletehaha shukriya
DeleteThat's is a real touchy....Aur to hindi mein iska rang kuch jyada hi dekh raha hai...
ReplyDeleteThanks sir ^_^
Deletepoignant....but BEAUTIFUL
ReplyDeletethanks mam
Deletearre beta bahut achhe! ab yeh batao likha kiske liye hai ? :D
ReplyDeleteRicha
shukriya maa.....nai aise hi apne liya likha :/
DeleteOHHH WOWWW!!! Superb... bahut hi acche hai ...
ReplyDeletethanks dear
DeleteNot at all silly!! Maybe you have outgrown the moment and not in gham any more :)
ReplyDeleteHaha....may be ;)
Deletevery nice Ritesh !!
ReplyDeletethanks :)
ReplyDeleteअतीत केअश्क़ को उकेर दिए बहुत खूब
ReplyDeleteवो कंहे मैने उन्हें भुला रखा है
अश्क़ बहते नहीं पलकों को सिला रखा है