[It is a silly little poem I had written 3
years back on 26th June 2010 during one of my Dumbledore-ish moments
:P]
Sitaaron ke chehel-pehel mein beeta
nishaakaal
Surya ki khushboo laaya naveen ushakaal
Pakshiyon ki sarsarahat
Vaahno ki gadgadahat
Sarv-vyapi fael gayee pavan ki hai
sansanahat
Kaali chaadar ka andhkaar hua khatam
Ab aasha ke prabhaat ka hai hua janam
Agyaanta, ashiksha evam puratanta ka karo
ant
Aur anusaran karo us mahatma ka
Jo tha Sabarmati ka Sant
PS- If you want to read really fascinating and powerful Hindi poems, then visit this blog called Words of Swati
Wow! Kya yaar! Chupa rustum again! This is one fab one, reminded me of the ones i have read in text books :)
ReplyDeletehaha....fab?? ye kitna mediocre poem hai... :P
ReplyDeleteYa, thoda un text books ki tarah ho gaya :P
Kal Kal karte neer ki bhanti ye kavya rachna shabdo ki jhilmil me timtima rahi hai. :P :P :P
ReplyDelete:P :)
Deleteसुन्दर रचना ... शब्दों का सरलता से किया गया प्रयोग इसे प्रभावी बना रहा है !!
ReplyDeleteएक सलाह है आपके लिए... यदि आप इस कविता या आपकी कोई भी हिंदी की रचना को हिंदी लिपि (देवनागरी ) में लिखेंगे तो इसकी सुन्दरता बढ़ जाएगी और पाठको के लिए पढना भी सरल होगा !!
Haan par mujhe nahi pata ki hindi mein hum kaise likhen
DeleteWow u have written it beautifully :)
ReplyDeletethanks megha :)
Deleteati sundar :D
ReplyDelete:p
DeleteActually it is a fun read. Please type in hindi next time.
ReplyDeleteOkay saru....i didnt know how to type in hindi na
DeleteIt's lovely and yes do type in Hindi. There is transliteration available on blogger.
ReplyDeletethanks rachna....i will figure out a way to write in hindi next time...promise
ReplyDeleteThis one is really nice..Lag ta hai class 10 ki yadein taaza ho gaye..:-)
ReplyDeletebilkul....ab boards ki taiyyari karo harsha ^_^
DeleteArre wah yaar... sahi hai.. waise one thing I would like to say... "khatam" is not shudh hindi like the other words .. so woh mujhe thoda khatka. Otherwise.. very creative. Heard "Nishakaal" after a long time.
ReplyDelete*claps*
haha.....ya it should be samapt :)
DeleteThat was a cute poem, d poetry wali genre me :D
ReplyDeletehehe ^_^
ReplyDeleteso u grew up 3 years back ? and you have just refined .. every moment ! Good !! Past is to cherish .. future is to dream .. and present is to what you love .. and do it the best, I say - thats MySay ;)
ReplyDeleteWow...some great words there...arey, i was a good student in hindi during my high school days...this poem is a leftover...a sort of a revisit to good, old times :P
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