Monday, July 1, 2013

Usha ki Aahat





[It is a silly little poem I had written 3 years back on 26th June 2010 during one of my Dumbledore-ish moments  :P]


Sitaaron ke chehel-pehel mein beeta nishaakaal
Surya ki khushboo laaya naveen ushakaal
Pakshiyon ki sarsarahat
Vaahno ki gadgadahat
Sarv-vyapi fael gayee pavan ki hai sansanahat
Kaali chaadar ka andhkaar hua khatam
Ab aasha ke prabhaat ka hai hua janam
Agyaanta, ashiksha evam puratanta ka karo ant
Aur anusaran karo us mahatma ka

Jo tha Sabarmati ka Sant 



PS- If you want to read really fascinating and powerful Hindi poems, then visit this blog called Words of Swati



22 comments:

  1. Wow! Kya yaar! Chupa rustum again! This is one fab one, reminded me of the ones i have read in text books :)

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  2. haha....fab?? ye kitna mediocre poem hai... :P
    Ya, thoda un text books ki tarah ho gaya :P

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  3. Kal Kal karte neer ki bhanti ye kavya rachna shabdo ki jhilmil me timtima rahi hai. :P :P :P

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  4. सुन्दर रचना ... शब्दों का सरलता से किया गया प्रयोग इसे प्रभावी बना रहा है !!
    एक सलाह है आपके लिए... यदि आप इस कविता या आपकी कोई भी हिंदी की रचना को हिंदी लिपि (देवनागरी ) में लिखेंगे तो इसकी सुन्दरता बढ़ जाएगी और पाठको के लिए पढना भी सरल होगा !!

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    1. Haan par mujhe nahi pata ki hindi mein hum kaise likhen

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  5. Wow u have written it beautifully :)

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  6. Actually it is a fun read. Please type in hindi next time.

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    1. Okay saru....i didnt know how to type in hindi na

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  7. It's lovely and yes do type in Hindi. There is transliteration available on blogger.

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  8. thanks rachna....i will figure out a way to write in hindi next time...promise

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  9. This one is really nice..Lag ta hai class 10 ki yadein taaza ho gaye..:-)

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    1. bilkul....ab boards ki taiyyari karo harsha ^_^

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  10. Arre wah yaar... sahi hai.. waise one thing I would like to say... "khatam" is not shudh hindi like the other words .. so woh mujhe thoda khatka. Otherwise.. very creative. Heard "Nishakaal" after a long time.

    *claps*

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  11. That was a cute poem, d poetry wali genre me :D

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  12. so u grew up 3 years back ? and you have just refined .. every moment ! Good !! Past is to cherish .. future is to dream .. and present is to what you love .. and do it the best, I say - thats MySay ;)

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  13. Wow...some great words there...arey, i was a good student in hindi during my high school days...this poem is a leftover...a sort of a revisit to good, old times :P

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