Monday, March 26, 2012

Interview with a Vampire



Ritika was fond of Twilight movies and vampire-based TV shows. She fancied meeting a vampire some day but knew that she may never meet the like of him.
One day, as she was strolling along the edge of the forest, she bumped into a stranger who had lurked out from the deep forest. He was tall, handsome and had a chivalrous appearance of a knight. He had fire in his eyes and she felt becharmed.
He came closer and held her hands. She meekly submitted. Introductions were exchanged merely by the battling of eyelashes. There was a whispered murmuring in the air as breeze flirted with the leaves. Closer and closer they came till only a breath separated them. Their hairs brushed against each other as their lips met. His hand worked on her back as she felt his neck with her lips.
Suddenly, the air was filled with his screams as he woke up from his dreams. He felt a blinding pain as he felt hot blood oozing out of his neck. He looked at the mirror and saw a trickle of blood flowing down his neck where there was a deep cut & teeth marks.
Hundreds of miles away Ritika woke up from her dream. Her reddened lips were smeared with blood and a sinister smile was playing on her lips.....



8 comments:

  1. EERIE!
    Sounds like those suspense of vampire dairies!
    :)

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    1. Haha...I haven't seen Vampire Diaries...But ya, I revel in eeriness :)

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  2. That does sound eerie. You would suspect the stranger was the vampire but you put a nice little twist on it...Hmmmm. I like it!

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    1. Hi Crystal. My posts always wait for your eyes...It's good to feel that you liked it :)

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  3. HIS screams? Nice twist, mister. :)

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    1. Hi Revacious... Thanks for liking the story. Keep coming always

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  4. Very interesting Ritesh, I loved it! Wish you expanded more on the storyline before you rounded it of with the final twist! :-)

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    1. Actually, I had written this sometime back over sms texts to a friend. Hence, the story is on the shorter side. Thanks for reading, dearie :)

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