Jovana sipped her coffee waiting for her unfaithful husband to pick up his poisoned tea. ‘You know dear, I have taken a strong dislike to teas and coffees since yesterday’s indigestion’- Peter reasoned pushing aside his cup....... And she slumped forward as Peter contentedly realised that the cyanide in her coffee had done the damage.
Oh nice twist ....
ReplyDeleteNice story!
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DeleteSuperb brother.. Loved the twist
ReplyDeleteThanks harish :)
DeleteVery nice...slightly wicked in a way but the makings of a great novel! I'd most definitely love to see more..;)
ReplyDeleteThanks Crystal for going through each n every story of mine....U have definitely become my most favourite visitor :)
DeleteThat was a nice... er... devilish twist to the story. Good one. !
ReplyDeleteHee hee. Do remember this in future...The next time your husband prepares coffee for you... Just tell him, I hate teas & coffees :D
DeleteMan! that was some twist. loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Prasoon. :)
DeleteTit before Tat.. :O
ReplyDeleteRead all of your 55 words.You seem an appreciable narrator. :)
Thank you surbhi for being so generous :)
ReplyDeleteOh dangerous couple.. nice twist, Rats.
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